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Submitted: March 16, 2011
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The Great Regression Page 00fby *GOOF-MD

Cartoons & Comics / Traditional Media / Comics / Pages

Prologue Page 06-07 of 09

Created and Written by Mat Heagerty.

Pencils by GOOF.

Critique by =h-leao Jan 23, 2013, 3:23:04 PM

I was really amazed with how much skill and the design is very thorough. The perspective is perfect, like the vanishing point, proportion ... everything is perfect. Light and shadow in the right place. But I must say that sometimes, unfortunately, too much detail is very confusing for a first reading of the image. I would try to clean it more. Maybe she'll get better color in order to understand where are the cars, which is pedestrian trail and that is for "cars". because it is too confusing.
Can you confuse with cybernetic parts of the scenario. Not exactly sure if that was their desire. But as I said, perhaps with colorful, give the picture to be better visualized. Everything else is great and you have a great trace.

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*rorsdors Jan 25, 2013

F**king fantastic, really a bit mind-blowing the work and worth it.

*GOOF-MD Jan 25, 2013

Thanks, appreciate it!

*GOOF-MD Jan 23, 2013

You make some very good points. Maybe I did rely too much on the eventual colors to help separate spaces and elements. I'll definitely keep that in mind in the future.

Thanks for taking the the time to share your thoughts. Appreciate it ü

~theCEOofDEATH Oct 24, 2012 Professional Traditional Artist

Brilliant scene!

*HCMP Jan 16, 2012

Diggin' these pages!

~PabloRemiro May 7, 2011 Digital Artist

Great work of perspective. Buildings, vehicles and people are really well done. Fantastic job.

*GOOF-MD May 7, 2011

Thanks!

~PabloRemiro May 8, 2011 Digital Artist

You're welcome!

~Josephine-LeClaire Apr 28, 2011 Professional General Artist

great details and backgrounds!

*GOOF-MD Apr 28, 2011

Thanks! Ü

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